My life has never been what you would consider a fairytale. I’ve had “magical” moments, but nothing that screamed, “DISNEY!” That was the case until this evening. Everything in this story is completely true. So sit back, relax, and relish in my Disney-like encounter. You may hurry and pop some popcorn if you so desire. You could also dress in a giant hotdog costume and sing, “Let’s all go to the lobby.” Not only would that prepare you for my story, it would also be highly entertaining…for me.
My roommate, Janel, and I went for a stroll this evening. We had no set course; that detail was left to chance. We found ourselves entering a wooded area. Our footsteps on the path offered a steady rhythm in the tranquility of the evening. Our laughter was accompanied by the rustle of leaves. As we walked deeper down the path, the trees were replaced by giant cattails. The scent of swamp hung heavy in the air. We turned onto a secluded trail and saw the bending blades of grass in a large glade. I glanced across the wide expanse of fluttering strands when something seized my gaze. The most beautiful deep brown eyes met mine. I stopped so suddenly that Janel looked at me in surprise, but my gaze never left his. By the look in his chocolaty eyes, I knew he was feeling the same emotions that were cascading through me. My heart was racing and there was a twinge of fear. But the magic of the moment was undeniable. I felt a rush of excitement, giddiness, tenderness. Finally remembering to breathe, I inched closer afraid to disturb the enchantment. He didn’t move, but his gaze never left mine. Suddenly, footsteps and laughter were heard. Anxiety welled inside because I knew this would ruin the ethereal air. I tore my gaze from his and turned and saw some runners approaching. ‘No!’ I thought. ‘Go away! You’ll ruin everything.’ Spinning around, I frantically searched the path to find that he had disappeared.
Knowing that all Disney movies end happily, I decided to maintain a positive outlook. Hopefully, I would see him again soon. And I did. I saw him hiding behind a tree. He was such a dear, or should I say deer. Yes, my magical moment was with an animal. It was an incredibly Disney experience except he didn’t start talking to us, which would have been AWESOME! And there were no men in tights. Rats!
Wednesday, August 27, 2008
Simply Magical
Posted by Annie at 9:46 PM
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Your stories make me happy! Also, I'm envious you can see deer on your walks. The only walks I've been doing are up to school and back. And when I say up to school, I really mean up to school . . . Alas, there are no deers. But there are some very interesting human specimens along the way :)
Haha, you should have gone into English! You're writing it really flowery and beautiful. Anyway, I am glad you got a magical moment with nature!
That was such a magical moment. I was looking at the pictures on my phone, and the movie one turned out the best... go figure.
I've always felt that when a writer can get your attention within the first couple of sentences, then they have a real talent. You did this to me. I was caught up and enthralled. I could see the Brown eye's through your writing style and my imagination. That was indeed a magical moment. We all need those from time to time.
Haha that's awesome! Were you guys down by Hobbs Pond?
Yes, we were. It's gorgeous down there! We plan to make it a frequent outing!
Come visit my homeland (town)...there were so many deer they actually had to trap and relocate them! Ha! Oh, and I saw one on the other side of a fence as I was parking next to the said fence last night. It wasn't as magical as your experience, but it was cool :)
He was such a dear, or should I say deer. Yes, my magical moment was with an animal.
Thanks for the laugh! I'm not certain of where Hobbs pond is at. I know of a small pond in Layton that you get to by turning left off of Gentile near Smiths and I think it is managed by the water company.
Around Christmas I was driving passed Layton Park and saw a few deer wondering in the road. I stopped and talked to a cop and he said they are frequently in the area.
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